There was a lonely lost girl walking around in the woods.
She had no idea where she was. When she tried to talk to people they would just
ignore her. It’s like they didn’t see her at all. She kept on walking until she
saw a small house in the middle of nowhere. She noticed there were people
living in the house, a husband, wife, and the husband’s mother. She watched
them everyday through the large window of their house. She would follow the
husband everywhere he went. Sometimes she even tried to talk to him and touch
him but he never seemed to notice her. Each day the lonely girl grew more and
more feelings towards the husband. She began to envy the wife.
One day, the girl decided to walk into the woods from the
same direction she came from. She noticed something strange so she walked
towards it. She saw a car that looked really familiar but she couldn’t grasp
onto how she knew it. As she walked closer, she saw her body lying there. It
was white, pale, and helpless. From then she realized that her car had flipped
and rolled all the way down there. It rolled so far into the woods that no one saw
or heard it.
The girl’s name was Jenny. She was from a small town about
an hour away. She had moved there all by herself because she wanted to start a
new life. Her husband had cheated on her and remarried so her plans were to get
married again and have a family in the new town. Sadly, that didn’t seem to
happen. It made her very sad.
She walked back to where the small house was. There she saw
the little family that lived there. She thought to herself that she could still
have the dream that she always envisioned. As this thought came up, she decided
to do something horrible and become the wife. One evening, the wife went
outside to do the laundry, the ghost lady attacked her and went inside the
wife’s body. Now she was in control of the body. At first, she didn’t know what
to think about this because Jenny was not an evil person, but she had always
wanted to be happy in her life and this was her chance to be happy.
The husband and his mother began to notice that the wife was
doing things differently such as the laundry and dishes. They didn’t think
anything of it though. They just thought she wanted to change things up a bit
because that’s the type of woman she was. As the days and months went by, they
continued on with their lives.
The husband will never know what really happened to his real
wife. He continued on his life with this ghost lady in their little house.
Author’s note: After reading “A Ghostly Wife,” I was
influenced to write this one. In the original story, the ghost went inside the
wife’s body and did many things to make the husband and his mother notice it
wasn’t his wife. I wrote this story about the ghost lady and how she got to
where she was. Some times tragedies happen and it wasn’t right for the ghost
lady to do what she did but she had a reason. I also thought it would be
interesting to keep the ending like that because it makes it creepier.
(Foggy woods: Pixabay)
Bibliography: Folk-Tales of Bengal by the Rev. Lal Behari
Day. Web source. Bengals: A Ghostly Wife
Cool story, Iab!
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed this story, but it did make me sad. That poor wife never saw it coming. I would suggest maybe describing how the lost/ghost girl looked in order to get a better picture of our main character. This could really set up the mystery of the story. Good job!
Emily
Hi!
ReplyDeleteThere's absolutely nothing I love more than a good ghost/scary/creepy story, so I already knew I would like this. Especially around this time of year! I actually wish that I had stumbled upon the original story myself when I was looking for them, but I guess I passed it up. This story was really great and I love that you showed sympathy for her and that she had a reason for doing it even though it was wrong. Good job!
Hi actually enjoyed a lot reading this story! It was very nice how you incorporated a lot of mystery in your story, it made it very captivating but also creative. However, I wonder if you expanded more on the wife when she gets into the woman's body, she could have been able to tell her husband about what happened. Anyway it was a fun story to read.
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