Wednesday, November 2, 2016

Reading Notes: Rushen Coatie


The “Rushen Coatie” story is a Scottish version of Cinderella. Cinderella was my favorite Disney movie growing up so this fairy tale stuck out to me. While I was reading this story, I was really surprised how different it was. Although the story line was similar, it had different events. I noticed that there are several versions of Cinderella but I have never read them. Since more people know the Disney version, I could rewrite this story and keep the same events. I like how the Rushen Coatie(Cinderella) met the prince at a church and not a ball. Also, they encountered each other more than just one day. I could also add some different details to the story as well. I think it will be interesting to just read a different version of Cinderella.

(High Heels: Pixabay)


Bibliography: More English Fairy Tales by Joseph Jacobs. Web source

Reading Notes: The Golden Ball


The “golden ball” is about two sisters who receive a golden ball each from a stranger. If they were to lose the golden balls then they would die. One sister lost her ball but her sweat heart said he would go get the ball because she was taken away to be hanged. I don’t really like how she was being punished for losing the golden ball so I could change that. I really like how in some Disney movies the princess gets locked up so I might use that. I also liked how she had a boyfriend that had to go through many life-threatening issues to get her golden ball back. Her boyfriend had to kill all of the giants and bogles that he encountered. I can change the events that he went through but still have him struggle. I will keep the ending the same. He then saves her and they will live happily ever after.


(Golden ball: Pixabay)

Bibliography: More English Fairy Tales by Joseph Jacobs. Web Source


Thursday, October 27, 2016

Story: An oriole's adventure

(Bird nest with eggs: Pixabay)


Hi, my name is Timmy. Here I am, sitting in this dark oval-shaped room. It is so spacious, warm, and comfy. It’s usually really peaceful in here but sometimes it feels like there is so much more beyond this oval-shaped room. As the days go by, this room seems to be getting so much smaller. It’s not as comfortable either. I like to stretch and move around, although it is kind of hard to do since this space is getting so small.

One day as I was stretching, I accidentally hit the wall and it began to crack. I was surprised because I usually stretch and it would be fine, but today was different. I could see light peeking through the cracks. As I was curious to see what was out there, I began to move around until the oval-shaped room wasn’t a room anymore.

As I looked around me, there were two other baby orioles right next to me. I got really excited because I wasn’t the only one there. As minutes passed, another baby oriole popped out of its egg. In total, there were five of us. We all talked to each other although it may have just sounded like a bunch of chirps.

I suddenly felt really hungry.

“Is anyone else hungry? I am starving!” I asked my siblings.
They all replied, “Yes!”

 “Okay, let’s find out where Mom and Dad are!”

Since we couldn’t really move and our bodies were not fully developed we couldn’t go anywhere. We all decided to chirp and call out for our parents. Minutes later, I could see my mom flying towards us.

“Hello, my babies, I knew you would be here soon. Here are some beetles and grasshoppers. Eat these while I go and find more food,” said my mother.

As I finished the piece I had, I looked up and Dad was flying towards us. I was still hungry. It’s weird because when I was still in that oval-shaped room I was never hungry.  Dad brought us some delicious fruits. I think he said they were called oranges, but they are definitely my favorite. After he gave them to us, he left to go find more food.

(Oriole eating an orange: Pixabay)

As the days went by, I noticed how each one of us began to grow feathers. My brother, who was bigger than us, grew his flight feathers before any of us did. He was able to leave the nest and find his own food. I sat there with the rest of my siblings just waiting until it was our turn. I wanted to see what was out there. My parents said it was dangerous but I just wanted to explore.

For some odd reason, I was the last one to grow my flight feathers and to also molt into my beautiful orange color. My mother said it was because I was special.

The day finally arrived and my mother told me I was ready to fly. I was kind of nervous but being the last one I was definitely ready to try this new thing out. The nest that I have been sitting on for about two weeks was on the branch of a pecan tree. As I stepped off of the branch I began to fly.

I was so amazed by everything I saw. There were so many trees, flowers, and other animals! I have never felt so free in my life. I was finally able to meet up with my family. They were all collecting nectar from a bunch of flowers. I never had nectar before so I found a flower and took its nectar.

“Wow, I have been missing out!” I told my family. “This is even better than the oranges!”

After we all had some nectar, my parents told us to gather ourselves and they asked if we were ready to see the rest of the world. I screamed with excitement. I didn’t know what to expect when I got out of my oval-shaped room but I have never been more excited. There is so much to see in this world.

“Before we leave, let’s all thank the pecan tree for keeping us all safe. The pecan tree is our good friend and before you go out into the real world I want you all to nest in the pecan tree. They will keep your eggs safe just like how they kept you all safe,” said Mom.

I asked my mother, “How come?”

Mom replied, “Long ago, the pecan tree kept an oriole family safe from a big storm and in return the father oriole warned the pecan tree that there was a cold coming so they shouldn’t put out their buds just yet. Ever since then, we have been great friends with pecan trees.”


After hearing this story from Mom, we all went to thank the pecan tree. He said we were welcome to come back any time and if we ever did pass by remember to say hi.

Well, I have to catch up with my family now because they are flying so fast. I wouldn’t want to lose them. I’ll let you all know how my next adventure goes!



Author’s Note: I was inspired to write this story after reading “The Pecan Tree’s Best Friend.” The story was about a pecan tree and a little oriole family that lived on the tree. The pecan tree liked the oriole family because they would eat the insects that ate the leaves and made holes in the tree. One day, there was a storm coming and the father oriole did not know what to do because his baby orioles were not able to fly yet. He was scared that that his children would get blown away by this storm. The pecan tree told him and his family to hide in the hole under his branch and they will be safe. By doing so, the storm passed and they were safe. In return, the father oriole told the pecan tree that there was a cold coming so he shouldn’t put out his buds. After this, orioles and pecan trees became really good friends.

I chose to write this story about a baby oriole and his experience from being in this egg to coming out into this world. I thought it would be interesting to write this in his point of view. Birds always seem so free to me because they are able to fly and see the world.



Bibliography: When the Storm God Rides: Tejas and Other Indian Legends retold by Florence Stratton and illustrated by Berniece Burrough (1936) Web source

Tuesday, October 25, 2016

Reading Notes: Tejas Legends - The Pecan Tree's Best Friend



(Oriole Bird: Pixabay)
After reading this story, I thought it was really cute. It is a great story about two different species that show mutualism. I could write a story about an orchard oriole family and focus on them. I haven't written a story about birds so I think this will be fun. I can expand on how they lived happily and then soon come across an issue. The weather was changing and a storm was coming through so it will soon disrupt their home. The tree will then help out the little oriole family.  I think focusing on just the oriole family will be an interesting take on writing this new story.


Bibliography: When the Storm God Rides: Tejas and Other Indian Legends retold by Florence Stratton and illustrated by Berniece Burrough. Web source.